Her red-brown fur glinted
By rays emitted by the sun.
Tiny rainbows everywhere formed
And danced upon her with little care.
Majestically sitting upon her throne,
She contains herself among rocks and scented pine.
Her haven, the forest teems of her aura
As she gazes upon hills with a sapphire glow.
A contest entry
- glow. by Nicolette.
700 points, ended August 18, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *~(~*(*~A N Y T H I N G !!!~*)~*)~* PW'S allowed! YOUR BEST/ YOUR FAVORITE !!!! CONTEST! SOMETHING I"M GONNA LIKE! by xxlisajazminexx.
500 points, ended September 26, 2007, 25 entries
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475 points, ended October 14, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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Now again this is lovely,nice senic view of her in amongst the wilderness,thank you for entering and good luck in our contest...MM
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VERY SWEET AND WONDERFULLY WRITTEN
VERY VIVID AND I LOVE ANIMALS SO THATS A PLUS LOL
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ENTERING YOUR WONDERFUL WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Woow what a way to captuer a Bid wild cat very good
This was pleasing to read. I felt as is I was ther besid you watching with you.
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I grew up in Colorado and therefore was constantly aware of the cougar's presence, though sadly I have only seen mountain lions in captivity. They are absolutely marvelous creatures, and a perfect object for presenting the image of "glow" as requested by the contest hostess. I mentioned in another comment I left a poet in this contest that I think alpine glow is itself a beautiful image, and you have combined it here with an equally wonderful gift of nature.
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Living in South Africa I can very much identify with the images you’ve painted here of a mountain lion – a majestic animal indeed. Your poem allowed the reader to see and enjoy some of the king of the jungle’s aura and glow – well done. Thank you so much for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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Enchanting!
This write was luminous and mystique.
The images were serene and captivating.
You have a real good imagination.
The words painted a picture of real beauty.
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This is a lovely penning of nature's observance. Good luck in Nic's contest. Be well, Poet. Wanda
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