Who am I really?
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I used to be so sure before-
Someone asks, and I’d say
I am wild, funny, crazy, cool
Now I am
Stuck.
I know, inside I am not okay
Too many open wounds and
Goodbyes, on top of promises
That too many people broke.
I wish I could heal every heart
Send some love to every sorrow
But it takes love inside to give
And too many people have taken
So I’m left with
Nothing
***
A contest entry
- Do you wear a mask?? Pic inspired by Soulful Woman.
600 points, ended August 10, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This has so much emotions man!
I'd like to heal people's sorrows too...
But sometimes... i'm having problems of my own too and don't have anyone to heal mine...
When your heart is empty... you just can't help it...
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Very powerful and well written. Thank you for your entry
Soulful Woman -
wow this is..almost a simple poem, yet it holds so much power and emotion in it. I feel that it a like a note left behind when someone has runaway. very real feeling to it. beautifully written.
I hope that you do not feel this way, noone deserves that.
All the best
Goodluck in the competition
~Hollow~
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