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Estranged

I am reluctantly numb
So effectively dead
They say the rage I feel
Is all inside my head

A contest entry

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  • Cant force beloved
    January 16
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    I like it a lot.


  • KnightOfShadows
    August 12, 2007

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    nice and short and to the point! Excellent! despite its short length this piece says a lot! I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much for entering! Excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!


    -Steve-