Go-ahead, hit me,
if that's what it takes,
to make you feel better.
Get it off your chest,
before you go to bed,
and let it rest!
I'll be your dart-board,
cause I'm used to it.
Now toss it!
Aim for my head,
if it pleasures you.
I can take it!
It's just like popping a balloon.
Soon, you get used to it,
and it's like nothing!
Maybe you can pop my eye,
and I'll have one less,
with which to cry.
That would be so nice.
Only one side,
to put mascara on.
Maybe you can pierce my lip,
so it will go limp.
Take a shot at it!
I know you want to,
and I'm sure you can do it.
Be sure and don't miss now!
Author notes
Shirley ann Shaw~~~~~~~~~~~Abuse,hate, Anger
A contest entry
- Odd Balances of Love and Hate Group Contest by WhatsErName.
600 points, ended August 12, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow pain anger hate it hurts to read this and its so much different from the other poems ive read of yours the poem itself is wonderful but i cant say i intirely enjoyed the pain that it presented me with
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My heart felt heavy reading this.I Have been abused most of my life so I know whats like to hurt and to have so much anger in me
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WOW! That hit (*no pun intended*) me right here! The absolute defiance of your tone makes me want to back your person up. I dug how it rhymed at parts, and at otehrs left you dangling! Great job and good luck!
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Once again I am unable to grade it unless you put your username in the author notes, remember you MUST be in the group Odd Balances of Love and Hate. If you are not a member feel free to join at:
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This is for my own benifit, no need to reply: PREWRITE (Nice jo
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