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Clock-eyed Timepiece

This loony clock is off his tree
And  you should find it quite a shock -
In three more hours the time will be
Eighteen past thirteen o'clock.

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  • Mary O gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Too cute. I needed a laugh,
    ~Mary o


  • x stoned romance
    September 2, 2008

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    hahahaha this is awesome. i have tried to do comical poetry, but it always ends up sounding so stupid. so short, but this is amazing. =P


  • Barry Hodges silver member
    January 14, 2008
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    I don't quite get this.


    • Gordon
      January 14, 2008
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      look closely at the clock, the time is now 10:18 and the clock goes to XIII which is 13 o'clock.


  • Danna Hobart
    December 19, 2007
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    How cute!


  • esroddo silver member
    August 21, 2007

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    So short yet it was sweet and funny, Great wit, I enjoyed it thank you for entering and good luck. LISA


  • bethan-gaze
    August 17, 2007
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    Oh, I love this witty write ... and where did you find the pic?


    • Gordon
      August 18, 2007
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      Thank you for the comment and hand claps. This one is my entry in a photo inspired contest.

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