Her tears are real
And so Is what she's done
She's lost and confused
She's like the table princess
Wearing her pink and black lace
Her long black nails
And the facial powder
It might be her excuse
Begging for help
Or even an escape
She's steps out of the club
Lights up her cigarette
Holds herself so strong
Calling it confidence
She dreams of a life
Without the cocain
Without the heroin
She's looking for someone to help
She needs someone to love her
She needs sincere kisses
She doesn't know where to go
It's like the tables her only home
She walk back home
When her parents ask how was work
She'll put on a pretty smile
And say It was all good
When she knows it's all lies
She lays on her bed and crys
Author notes
option 2.
ItsAllTheSame68(Gianna)
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amazing!!
i love how u portrayed her!!!!! its simply beautiful!! -
Her tears are real
And so Is what she's done
She's lost and confused
this is where it all begins
tear are real and so is what is done -
a beautifully written poem! Great job! Thank you so much for entering! Excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!
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thanks for entering sweetie, much luck and love to u...xxx -
BTW
The last line...I meant maybe take out the "is when"
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I like it...
Except for a couple mistakes...
SB: She walks back home and
it might be in the finalists list if you
change the last line...
Thanks for entering!
*PEACE*
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