You say that you couldn't care less about me,
But your actions are telling me a whole different story,
I am so much happier now,
That we aren't together,
So much for,
"I'll love you forever."
It feels so good to finally smile,
Trust me,
I haven't done that in awhile,
You were a boy who once mean't the world to me,
And now you're the boy who I would rather not see,
When I was with you I was always stressed,
The life that we had built together,
Had become a mess,
For awhile you made me feel like,
Someone only you could understand,
you made everything better,
When no one else would,
You took my hand,
You made promises to me,
That every girl wants to hear,
But your intentions were clear,
You never actually loved me,
I'm surprised it took me that long,
To finally see,
That now you are the boy,
Who you swore that you would never be.
Author notes
This is about my ex...
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. This was very well written. Powerful and emotional. Thank you for sharing this us. It was a great read.
Much love
Ylova
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Very well written poem. I liked how you broke up the ryhme scheme with couplets dotted throughout. Also I echo the other commentors in the, if this is based upon personal experiences, I'm sorry it had to happen. C'est tragique, mais c'est la vie.
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wow .... & Damn
i sorry that u hAd 2 experience that some romances arnt meant 2 last 4ever but dont become bitter theres a guy 4 u babe.. -
Wow this was a powerful write with a lot of truth I am glad that you saw through things and are better.
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nice
hi really liked this poem. its been a long time since we spoke! hope u been ok and i wanna start reading ur poetry again! if u ever wanna talk my msn is ncwynn@hotmail.co.uk x x -
wow umm... i like the flow sorry things didnt work out between u 2 1 luv
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well writ as always, keep up the great work!!!!
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