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i almost had you
you were this close
not knowing what to do
you were this close

my source said you liked me
i was this close
went up and didn't flee
i was this close

you said yes
we were this close
it turned into a mess
we were this close

doing what you didn't need to do
you came this close
pulling up my skirt, too
you came this close

next it was like i wasn't here
we weren't close
even when i whispered in your ear
we weren't close

you would throw me around
i came this close
pumbled my soul to the ground
i came this close

you said you didn't care
you weren't close
then why should i be there
you weren't close

no im gone
im not close
it didn't last long
im not close

we....will....never....be

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to guys and girls who just dont fit

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    I am here to say,
    this close does not count
    for if it is not all the way
    it was not meant to be


  • islekine gold member
    August 9, 2007
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    I really like the style...

    Is it lyrics? It should be.
    Nice flow...
    Thanks.