kissme between greenleaves
between sheets I
like the rain, love
feeling the wet come inside
the passion
that makes dreams
into people, and
reasons into tomorrow
Author notes
Another one from an old notebook I'm going through
too short?
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A really sweet poem
Loved the title and the whole feeling of it. -
Loved your poem. Short and sweet and to the point. The ending is brilliant.
that makes dreams
into people, and
reasons into tomorrow
Oh this I so agree with. Thank you for commenting on my poem and especially thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Kelle Marie
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Yes
About what this poem says
In it it says it all
There's nothing left for me to say
I'll just keep having a ball
Tiki Cat
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"that makes dreams
into people, and
reasons into tomorrow "
These are some lines to be proud of! I love to go through my old notebooks and see what turns up!
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very deep way to express the full fill ment behind a kiss you really made this piece very magical and alive and i was very honored to read it
sxy
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a little to short but veri good.
Keep up the good work..
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this is lovely... I think
I'd like to read more to this piece, but that is my only issue... I like what I have read so far... subtly sensual and I like that last stanza and the way that consequences are thought of...
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It's not too short...I like it myself. It's sweet
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Excellent
I thought this was really great, very passianate... love it! thanks for sharing.
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hmmmmmm well kevin this is REALLY! good lol...
"feeling the wet come inside
the passion"
I like that, the way of saying rain drops between kisses. Very nice. -
ooooooooo but old poems are good to go through
I love what you said about " That makes dreams into people ". I have never thought about it like that before but yes, you're right. Dreams do make people.
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