Tell Me

In this silent world of yours,

Tell me what you hear,

I know you don't have much to say,

So tell me what you fear,

Do you hear the morning,

And do you sense the night,

Can you feel the darkness,

And do you see the light,

Do you know the feeling,

Of sunlight on your skin,

And do you hear the silence,

When someone drops a pin,

Within this silent world of yours,

What you see is white,

And what you hear is beautiful,

So don't give up the fight.

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Piccola
July 8
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this is amazing. I love the idea that brought it about and they rhyme is flawless. Great job
passim
August 12, 2007

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Wow, this is beautiful. Such easy rhyming rhythm. But lovely sentiments too. Well done.
crimsondew
August 11, 2007
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This is soothing and beautiful.... Very gently persuasive about living on....
Beanbiscuit
August 11, 2007

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This piece is of much encouragement and strength. The love, the care and the support from the heart will keep the spark of hope alive. When the eyes open again, stories will be told.
ea
August 11, 2007

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very delicate and soft -- this has the quality of children's bedtime blessing. comforting and encouraging.