Im placing this fragile heart of mine,
Inside your little black box of velvet,
All the stains that look like wine,
Seeping through the cracks and i can't help it,
All these defacements on this box,
Are under quick repair of dedicated hands,
Moving skillfully when all is lost,
Burying our fears in these hollow sands.
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i dunno..these words just kinda came to me..tell me wat u think please..
Please tell me what you think
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love it, very creative and imaginative. well done
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i like it, that's what I think. It was very creative. And the rhyme was amazing. It was a very different subject but it flowed so beautifully and you made it work. great piece...again.
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