Throw away all your misery
Let your heart beat again
Leave the pain and betrayal
Open up yourself-
Get healed
Never knew this could happen
Found love after disaster
Throw away all this misery
Don't let that happen again
Leave behind the hurt
Open up your heart
Never knew this could happen
Found love after so much disaster
Author notes
=\ what do you think? ((Dance Floor Anthem by Good Charlotte inspired me))
A contest entry
- Make Me Perfection by adsaige.
600 points, ended October 12, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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emotional, yes. now that I read your authors notes, yeah it makes sense.
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Judged
Honestly, I felt this could've had a bit more...story to this.
However, what you did was point out the main message that you were bringing across. But, it doesn't contain all the poetic verse that I know you possess. I can't point my finger to this and say this is something that will inspire (at the moment)...and it's kind of one of those poems that you sit back and have to try to remember. The title is...eye-catching, the poem seems like it is a recovery, re-starting and situation yourself back in the world of poetry, love, and pain, etc.
Not in anyway meaning to cause disrespect or anything, but this is what I think, what I feel when I read this piece. So, you can re-write this, or enter a new poem, I hate to judge you upon this one poem.
But thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, and good luck! -
this is such a good recovery poem...got intrigue by the title...and the content was far amazing than what I expected to read...so beautiful...if this is from a personal experience...well, glad you've "found love after so much disaster..."
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A good song to be inspired by!! I'm listening to "Keep Your Hands Off My Girl"
I love your poetry, and this is no exception!!
Savvy
oxox
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