Swiftly swings the summer sun
into the sky of spotless blue.
The clouds roll in before the night
and sunset takes on violet hues.
Incessant heat has been replaced
by gentle, balmy summer breeze.
And little spots of fairy light
now fill the world and all I see.
In a list
A contest entry
- Swiftly Pen A Poem of Summer You have 30 minutes!!! by Tirrell.
450 points, ended August 9, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a beautiful way to end the day...incessant heat has been replaced by gentle, balmy summer breeze...Feels so nice and WONDERFUL you won Gold!!!
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A very beautiful poem, this would fit very well into my contest Sunsets Are Best {Shared} Sunrises Are Best {Alone} x good luck in the other contest and take care x
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Thank you! I'll have to check that out!
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Beautiful imagry and powerful too.
I like this poem alot. Very nice.
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Thanks Tirell. Great contest. Thanks for the Golden trophy!!! woohoo! Glad ya liked it, means alot.
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