Sadistic tongue
lies severed on
bathroom floor,
cutting itself
from body of betrayal-
Sipping on alibis
of last nights
whereabouts,
hope is seduced
with transparent
exaggeration;
[truth serum]
Suggested peace
only hides true
intentions,
[selling soul for
Happy Meal]
only to choke
on cheap prize inside-
Karma's hard to swallow
A contest entry
- Quickie, 30 minutes, 10 entries, 50 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended August 9, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Really good - a finalist for sure
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This is really good I love the raw truth the imagery is a grandstand thanks for entering...
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Holy Moses!!
Wonderful piece penned busy bee
That Happy Meal had me salivating
andddddddddd the truth serum
Congratulations on Your Trophy
Love this one!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent, I loved this.
I would have given this gold too.
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You know Amy
This is genius...this is pure brilliant genius.
The last line is like...OMG brilliant. Sipping on alibis is like remarkable. I love it; it seems so casual and routine.
This is remarkable.
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Excellent take on the prompt, loved the verbiage.
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Whoa this was a fantastic take
on the prompt.
Well done sweetie
Delila
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Your prompt! "Propaganda Pimps "
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