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Imprisoned

A Broken Man
In A Forgotten Land
Left Behind
The Gift Of Time

A Shattered Man
Behind Metal Bars
Remebers His Sins
Of A Massacared Crime

They Pay The Price
Of Fantasies Slipped
The Victim Or Criminal
Both Dead Inside
Tortured In Heart
Dead In The Eyes
Nobody Cares
If They Live Or Die

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  • MiSs ImPeRfEcTiOn
    December 3, 2007
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    god i want to say more i love it


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    wow this is good! i love the way you tell of victim and criminal and how it relates in the end!!!!
    Great job!!!
    stephanie


  • Kindredblood
    August 10, 2007

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    Ive done the the time, from many different crimes, now im free i plan to stay that why, a prison is like a coffin at times, you enter and sometimes you never leave, just slowly turn to worm food.
    Ecellent write, strong worded and it really hits home hard, to someone like me, but is all good, its my past and ive moved on, deep poem, well worth reading for any and all.


  • gothicviking
    August 10, 2007

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    I like it

    It strikes a chord within me... I know many people in my family and out, that have suffered in that way. both the victim and the criminal. It brings mixed emotions. And that is a good thing... I like when a poem makes you think.