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The Spot (pictured)

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____________________________Rock_______________________ all___________________________ ___________________________shades____________________ of color,_______________________ _________________________water full_______________of shine, this______________________
_____________________place at the sea, _________is all mine. Yes, I___________________
_________________share with others, but to____ me, it is my place, to ________________
________be able to have peace, and not have _to pace. I love the ocean, with _________
all the little animals, shells, and crabs, and helping one as it falls. I relish fishing,--------------------------------------------------------------except eating my catch,/_-_-_--__--__--__-__--_-_--__-_--___-_-__--_-__-_---_-__--_--__\it makes me sick, \/\/\\/\/\/\\/\/\/\/\/\/\//\//\/\\\/\/\//\/\/\/\/\/\////\/\\/\/\/\because it seems I already knew the batch. I only go with my family, you see, and it is always different, when I have more people with me. While at the sea, I go to my place, my own little spot,where<\/> to, my brothers dare not race. I am always taken aback, by how serene, and ||how isolated I feel,as on my rock, I lean. As we leave, I take one last glance, and sigh as we go,as if<\/>in a trance._____________
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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    Beautiful

    It must be wonderous to have such a place to know is there where the inner soul carries it until you meet again.


  • SeaWithYourHeart
    August 14, 2007

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    AMASING!!!! and it rhymes i cant even pick out a favoprite bit it is all so wonderful FAVORITES LOL absolutely thankyou so much i love it
    well done
    GOOD LUCK