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____________________________Rock_______________________ all___________________________ ___________________________shades____________________ of color,_______________________ _________________________water full_______________of shine, this______________________
_____________________place at the sea, _________is all mine. Yes, I___________________
_________________share with others, but to____ me, it is my place, to ________________
________be able to have peace, and not have _to pace. I love the ocean, with _________
all the little animals, shells, and crabs, and helping one as it falls. I relish fishing,--------------------------------------------------------------except eating my catch,/_-_-_--__--__--__-__--_-_--__-_--___-_-__--_-__-_---_-__--_--__\it makes me sick, \/\/\\/\/\/\\/\/\/\/\/\/\//\//\/\\\/\/\//\/\/\/\/\/\////\/\\/\/\/\because it seems I already knew the batch.\> I only go with my family, you see, and it is always different, when I have \/\>more people with me. While at the sea, I go to my place, my own little spot,where<\/> to, my brothers dare \>not race. I am always taken aback, by how serene, and ||how isolated I feel,as\/\> on my rock, I lean. As we leave, I take one last glance, and sigh as we go,as if<\/>in a trance._____________
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest of my Island by SeaWithYourHeart.
520 points, ended August 14, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful
It must be wonderous to have such a place to know is there where the inner soul carries it until you meet again.
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AMASING!!!! and it rhymes i cant even pick out a favoprite bit it is all so wonderful FAVORITES LOL absolutely thankyou so much i love it
well done
GOOD LUCK


