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Running

My feet hit the ground
falling,
the sky is growing bigger now.
i run, i feel the
cool air,
in and around me, consuming.
run, jump, fly
higher and higher
I can soar!
i can hit the roof
forever more...

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something short and simple... just like running... but it means alot to me.

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  • Lily of the Valley
    August 9, 2007
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    I think your poem says alot about running and how you feel about it, the freedom it must give you on a personal level, possibly an escape from the world and the problems in it. I like the way you describe how you can hit the roof forever more. What a great feeling to have!