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Broken bound...

Missing image


Yesterdays smiles
remembering sunshine
and reliving happiness
Secretly shared


Togetherness
fixed us back than
One at soul
A bound of
lovers…

Tomorrows tears
only showing remains,

leftovers

Being silent spirits
driven apart


Unfulfilled promises
Different views
Two seperated souls

A couple of
enemy’s…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

1990 till 2006

A contest entry

A divorce as I wrote it quick....

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 29

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    This is beautifully written. I like how it doesn't sound biting and bitter. Nicely done. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. I'm honored to have you show your work here.


  • Samplette gold member
    March 15

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    Very nicely done. Great wording and imagery. I think you did a wonderful job. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam

  • phoenixonfire
    August 10, 2007

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    Very beautiful in right! What a lovely and clever take on the prompt..the concept of gradual seperation is excellent!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    luv
    pri


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 9, 2007

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    AWESOMENESS...

    Like you, my doppelganger (= evil twin )
    Great write, you did such a great job with the prompt, i wish you well in this contest.

    And i have to agree with Sir Wattle...
    we really must do something about this broken heart of yours...maybe we can have a quilting bee and sew it back together for you


    The good twin



  • wattle silver member
    August 9, 2007

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    Ms Wolfy, your poetry is able to break down defenses and invade places where you haven't been invited. - We really should do something about this broken heart you live with/carry on your sleeve. I have band-aids if that would/will/could/can help. The leader of our pack can't be a love sick romantic; can she?. ---- Beautiful poem. - Thank you.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    Wow girl, what depth this write has. You did an amazing job on the prompt. Well done hun! Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    This indeed was deep my dear.

    I can feel your pain. Wishing i could

    erase your pain, yet no this is a cycle

    only you can get yourself through.

    I am here if you need me.

    Love ya

    Tory

     

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