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Hellish Orgasm

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Caustic breath heated fallen soul

Acidic tongue slithered against nipple

Spikes pierced thin of skin

Bone hard spur penetrated moist pool

Legs agape, sinned submittingly in ecstacy

Wrapped in a caged grasp, mastered by pleasure

Lifted to plateau by wings of hell

Ascending in inhibitions, lips murmured

Sweat saturating dust in heated thrusts

Unchained in orgasm and descending in ripples

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  • Sanshay
    August 20
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    Makes me want to wet your lips with mine and take you where I know you love to go and drown

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 9, 2007
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    Very nice take on the prompt. Exudes raw stimulation. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm

  • penman gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    excellent

    Oh my did you truly describe this picture with such fire. Really is powerful. Best of luck in the contest.


  • rainyday woman
    August 9, 2007

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    Really Hott

    Well you have penned quite an erotic decent into the pit. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest.

    Cheryl