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promise

Oh, sweet and precious promise
of a bright new day.
You sit together now
and simply want to play.
But some day far ahead,
some day I can not see
you might be our leaders
and show us true beauty.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 9, 2007

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    Your words are so true here!
    We can only hope that our children
    grow up to lead promising and positive
    lives. Lives that are so different than
    the ones that we live now. Wanting and
    providing the best for children is such
    an important thing for any parent. Something
    that we all strive for each and every day.
    Thank you for your entry in my contest!
    Good luck to you!





    Jeremy0826





  • Stardust-luvr
    August 9, 2007

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    children are our future and often more than not they are our teachers among men well done and good luck xxx


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 9, 2007
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    great take on the prompt. enjoyed thsi piece. Best of luck to you in the contest.
    Tory


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 9, 2007
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