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Broken Dreams

Broken Dreams from a
Lost Soul hallowed inside my mind.

Shattered Thoughts from
Fragmented Eyes bore into my heart.

Is this really what we want for you?
Is this really what I need?

Discarded Love from an
Abandon Heart leave me with no choice.

Forgotten Times from
Misplaced Trust bare my deepest desires.

Is this really the end for me?
Is this really the beginning?

For life is death,
Death is heaven,
Heaven will never be found.

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  • Trial and Error
    August 9, 2007

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    Well, unlike Amanda, I have not lost my touch to read with understanding. This is amazing, as always, Potter. You're a brilliant writer, and I hope you see that.


  • Infinite Butterfly
    August 9, 2007

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    After months and months of no update I have lost my touch to read with understanding. I don't understand but its nice to see an update knowing that you are alive. I like it though and still understand that it is not for anyone person. I've grown up and changed a lot and I am ready to be your friend again if you would have me. I think about you daily and pray that you are safe. Thank you for this little sign that you are still alive.

    With love,
    Amanda