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Donegal Rock-a- Bye

Hush my little one, lay down your head
Its time to sleep soundly away in your bed.
Your father is out, attending the sheep
There`s nothing to fret about, lay down and sleep.

I`ll do the worrying, hush now don`t cry
He will be here again soon, bye and bye.
A lamp in the window will guide his way home,
So he won`t hurt himself on a great stone.

The kettle is singing away on the fire.
I`ll put some more turf on, so it grows higher.
He will find a warm welcome when he gets here,
So sleep away little one, there`s my sweet dear.


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  • This is a classic! BRAVO!!!!!! How wonderfully, colorfully, and simply stated.


  • individuality gold member
    April 24

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    choice words here, well presented! i enjoyed reading this poem very much and am inspired by it…


  • Cannonsfire
    August 9, 2007

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    Just reminds me on 'hush little baby don't you cry' so sweetly done and I thank you for a beautiful entry. Love, C


  • suseann
    August 9, 2007

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    So comforting and whispers lyrically. It certainly could asure a childs spirit. Wonderful composition.


  • annamoy
    August 9, 2007

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    Ah so sweet ! A lovely tender lullaby indeed. Very nice and I wish you all the best in the contest.

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