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On a whim

Gray for any inspirations
such an odd postion
brilliant letters that span across the milky page

killing for advocation
suffer for an amputation
craving the flow (young age)

SUFFOCATION
believe me
CRAVE ATTENTION
no stealing

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  • lust in a grenade
    August 9, 2007
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    interesting definetly have to think to understand it but it seems like you were grasping for ryhmes in certain places for instance the part about inpostion
    and then the line suffer for amputation but it's definetly a good idea it just needs to be worked out a little bit