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Sick Sad World.. .

You've Bruised Me.
You've fed me LIES.
You Sir Played  Me.

I never knew how sick and twisted a person could be
Until I met you.



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  • NicotineHeartbreak
    August 11, 2007

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    This is a good write, I wouuld love to see ore of your work, I think you are a very talented writer.

    Love Kit

    x x


  • WhatsErName
    August 9, 2007

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    I am surprised, its actually really good ☻,it has a strong show of emotion and although it's free verse it has nice flow that makes it pleasant to read . Just one thing I think, "You've feed me lies" should be "You've fed me LIES" instead, otherwise nice job.