Solid structure of who we are
a cause and effect for all to see,
the building blocks that do exist
inside of you and me.
The blueprinted map of our life
comes with but a single twist,
when x meets y in unison
and together they will mix.
The result, a uniqueness every day
and all because of DNA.
Author notes
Picture prompt
The sculpture reminds me of a DNA model.
H
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10/10/30 by penman.
725 points, ended August 9, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
-
wonderful take on the prompt!
Great poem once again..
Lynda
-
I like the blocks and mixes and twists
-
This was EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT, I would never have ventured into DNA. Brilliant and I love the rhythm and rhyme you carry, excellent cadence, excellent work! A shiney coming your way
~Tia
-
nicely written dear friend and poet, you took it to a level none other had here.
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
