Rising up through youth
Growing pass the pain
My heart expanded two fold
Now there is greater wealth to gain
Breathe...then count the ways
Think...attention is all I paid
Affirm...loud and clear
Wisdom is more than just an enamel tooth
It's a mouth full of gold
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this write is amazing. I love last two lines that you ended the poem with, it's a perfect ending. I love the flow, and the 4,3,2 stanza's too. Its crazy how you put so much in so few lines.
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