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In Peace, War

First Man saw love, peace,
Then found religion, in which
he found war and hate,

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Just found it funny. Had a minor discussion with another poet, each of us finds that the other spewed hatred. Then I realized the only real difference was the religion. Just something to mull over. I hate haiku, the notes are longer than the poems. Oh yeah, and the title sucks, oh well.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    August 9, 2007
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    It is amazing how one can see one thing and someone else sees something completely different.