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The Poets in my Family

Grandma and Grandpa
singing in and out of harmony
Their voices are poetry

My brother and sister
poking fun of me
Their laughter is poetry

Mom and dad
once again lecturing
Their love is poetry

They don't write it down
They don't even see
They are living poetry

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For Bob

My point is basically summed up: Everybody's a poet, even if they don't know it

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  • pen-inhand
    August 13, 2007

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    Thanks for entering our contest! I'm afraid we disagree that not everyone is a poet! The differences we all share in this world is what makes life interesting. Not everyone could be a doctor, or a car mechanic for instance. We all have our niche in this life, Bob feels poets are different because of their ability to put into words emotions, sights and sounds that not everyone can. It doesn't make one person better than another, thats not what he's trying to say. Just that we all are different in our own special way! Best of luck to you, Kelly & Bob


    • Alikilie
      August 13, 2007
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      I think my point wasn't quite grasped. Just because some of us put our poetry to words doesn't mean we're the only poets. Everyone is poetic in what they do.. the doctor who carefully cares for his patient is a poet in his work, etc... Life is full of poetry, maybe our ability to put it into words rather than act it out makes us less of a poet


      • SherriLynn72
        November 6, 2007

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        If they knew our family....

        Our Family is very poetic, from writing songs to singing to writing poetry. And they are also some of the Greatest Story tellers I have ever met.You included...Loved this poem!!


  • Mirthryl
    August 11, 2007

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    I really enjoyed the different ways you have learned to see poetry! You are so right! You did a great job of pointing them out.

    Very good title, and the last stanza was an excellent sum up for your piece. A very enjoyable read!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 11, 2007

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    I like this. The more I write, the more poets I see out there. The more I am moved by beauty and wisdom of preachers, for example. I here pure poetry.


  • Kappa Pyua
    August 11, 2007
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    Cute

    THis is a cute little ditty, that makes the message so plain some will never see it, Good work UNT.

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