A feeling that is haunting,
A past not soon forgotten,
My emptiness is daunting,
Throughout my body, rotten,
I know that I have failed you,
In spirit and in whole,
Athough that I still fear you,
I finally reached my goal.
The tears, oh how they flooded,
The blood, oh how it flowed,
But what I share with you now,
Is not really all that old,
This is somewhat continous,
Although I hide it well,
My happiness a picture,
Now, sadness is my spell.
How did you see it coming?
Through the darkness and the light.
How did you know I suffered?
Alone, all through the night.
I'm guessing your alone too,
I think we're all the same,
Forgive me when I say this,
But I think you're the one to blame.
A contest entry
- {{ R* e* C* o* V* e* R* Y* }} by XInsanity-FairX.
550 points, ended August 17, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was great...the rhyme and the flow were perfect which made it a very easy read...it had emotion it...strong emotion...a bond shared ny lonliness...the need to be helped...not not truly wanting it...
being alone in the world with just one person...one person that makes you feel even that little bit better...because they know how yew feel
this was a great peice...the imagery in it was also outstanding...truly great write...thnx for entering and good luck..
xx
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