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Breaking Free

Breaking free of the ropes that hold me down
Like a bird I fly away
Searching for something
Maybe love to come my way

But I'm done with rules
Life's to short
I'm running away
No going to school

Don't try to stop me
I'll never quit
I will probaly just tell you
Stick It

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  • Melodies
    August 28, 2007

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    Most of the kids I know who say this...

    Are hoping to be free but haven't found a way to do it without having a job, unless they are living at home with their parents, which they wish not to do but can't afford anything else. OH MY GOSH... Cool poem! VERY!


  • Sonja
    August 15, 2007

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    Well, even the birds must eat, they are not always flying, there are not always enough food in the air and the ground. So, fly free and find your source of life. Some of them are writing poetry.
    ~Sonja~