One More Love Song

Can you play me one more love song
I'm dancing with my friend
Can you play it forever
I don't want this night to end

Please help me to keep her
In my arms till morning light
Let me be her lover
If only for one night

So play me one more love song
I'm dancing with my friend
Can you play it all night long
I may never have this chance again

Can you sing these words for me
From the bottom of my heart
Tell her in sweet melody
I can't bare to be apart

Can you play me one more love song
I'm dancing with my friend
Can you make it last forever
I don't want this night to end

Author notes

bluecollarlove---can i have this dance

A contest entry

Song Lyrics, please! by Bethany Rose. 500 points, ended August 25, 2007, 8 entries
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140th Contest by Tarja. 450 points, ended January 7, 2008, 14 entries
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come one come all lyrics wanted!!! by diabeticboy. 1050 points, ended April 15, 2008, 30 entries
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A Poetry Contest by lightswitches. 300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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[I love the way you move;] by kill the lights. 525 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
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Love Song Inspired. by Poetryintheblood. 450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 10 entries
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Poetryintheblood
May 21, 2008
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Thank you for your lovely entry and song choice, good luck in my contest, Josie
kill the lights
April 20, 2008

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This is good ...the rhyme was a bit predictable but it's still a sweet piece.

Thanks for enetering.

[stay sick']
xx Sin
lightswitches
April 19, 2008
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This was truly great. I liked how you knew to repeat the last line again. This is totally a song!
diabeticboy
April 1, 2008

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well my dear friend i would indeed play more love songs just for you. thnk you for this outstanding piece and good luck in the contest
Tarja
January 7, 2008

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RULE: Tell me which option you chose in your AUTHOR'S NOTES. Better luck next time. I do not accept any entry without this.
Whispering Wind
August 9, 2007
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WONDERFUL!...this just flowed a cross my mind and left me feeling like dancing...Can you make it last forever

I don't want this night to end:f:f:f...

Beautiful words from the heart of a true poet*hug*

Good-luck in contest:f

LOVE*rose*

ANN
Bethany Rose
August 8, 2007
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This is a wonderful set a lyrics, but how does it pertain to the contest?