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Blind

I have fears that you won't notice
you've got puppet strings on me.
What if you never realize
you've got so much control?

And do you know that you can
say anything at all and it will
echo for years and play back
when I miss you the most?

You've got this way of smiling
that holds me, and I wonder why
I let myself crack down my guard
and follow blindly after you.

If you find that you're not settled,
find you need something new,
keep my heart, my head, my body
I don't ever want them back.

Never tell me that you're leaving,
I just couldn't bare to watch you go.
Just turn around and walk away
don't tell me, no, just go.

Author notes

I know this isn't a traditional song with a chorus, but... oh well. I don't want it to be that way.

I know it seems cliché. I'm okay with that, too. I wrote it for someone, not for the public really.

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Comments


  • giving up on poetry
    August 16, 2007
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    nice emtion good feel the aliment of fear of being og overpassed very easy to relate 2


  • giving up on poetry
    August 16, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    nice emtion good feel the aliment of fear of being og overpassed very easy to relate 2