I used to love you
But you broke my heart
Then you came back to me
Thinking I'd take you back...
BUT YOU WERE WRONG!
You had your chance and you blew it!
BEG all you want to
I don't care anymore!
You say that you love me now..
BUT I HATE YOU!
You don't really love me...
You just want one thing...
ADMIT IT! ALL you want
Is to get inside me...
But it isn't gonna happen,
I won't let it!
I don't need your shit!
You ain't getting what you want!
so just LEAVE ME ALONE!
I'll never be your lover again...
NOT even your friend!
I guess what I'm trying to say is..
WE ARE THROUGH!
Author notes
something I wrote a while back for my ex... who I am now friends with somewhat... lol. what do you think of it?
A contest entry
- A love that was never real but the pain after was by MysteriousMoonlight.
875 points, ended December 29, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Revenge of The Ex by GypsyEyes.
450 points, ended December 24, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
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This is a good piece!I love the flow and choice of words!It's an amazing piece good luck int he contest!
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Judge Says
Dude we're in the same contest! good luck! well i loved this! i swear this just happened to me like a week ago! thank you for entering my contest!
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Thanks.
I'm sorry that happened to you... it sucks.
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Impressing Poetry
Lots of built up anger most be inside your heart. Causes it sure does seem that way inside this poem. He most of hurt you lot to make you have to hate him. Causes: Hate has to be the bitterlessness expressiton to give anyone. But I am not saying hating is bad... it the point-aim-zone some people take our hearts, feelings & emotions onto to be filled with regret to met such taker but, never to be the giver. Well keep up the excellent writing, I hope you like what I gave you; Maybe you can give it to me return too...3 Applauds!
Take Care
*Sir. Love Coffin*
AKA: Seth
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