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Cryptic Me

Tears running down a persons face
When we can't relieve someones pain
Every drop of blood someone bleeds
Begging for forgiveness on their knees
The deathtoll to a terrorist attack
Done by a selfish person's act
The trust filled when a bride says "i do"
Stabbed in the back thinking it was true
Loving your family with all your heart
But they the ones who tore you apart
These things we can come to understand
But there are things we can't on the other hand
Silver tears the moon cries in the dark
The silent screams that isn't heard from far
Why people in need rejects help many times
Why criminals do their betraying crimes
The earth always revolving around the sun
The hate buried deep inside of everyone
When blood pulses through the veins so fast
Why has it come to having a horrible past
To understand someone else's pain inside
Why in the darkness people choose to hide
Puzzle's of many lives to decipher so easy
But it won't be so easy because i am
Cryptic Me

Author notes

BloODyScArREdMoON now known as CrypticMe aka Silky

im not sure what this poem is about to me in my life to my feelings or anything but it does have a reason for me writing it yet for me to know

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  • crazziladi
    November 10, 2007
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    interesting! gook luck


  • Mirthryl
    November 10, 2007

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    It is so difficult to really KNOW what is inside someone else's heart. It can even be hard to truly see what is in our own hearts at times! I think your name is a fitting title for your poem!

  • Stormraven
    November 10, 2007
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    This is really different , thank you for entering my contest , storm


  • Under Construction
    August 17, 2007
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    Thnxx Silky! Good luck in the contest!


  • LovelyDesire
    August 15, 2007
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    omigosh!!

    speechless....one of my favs


  • The Dead King
    August 9, 2007
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    I LOVE IT

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