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Shoulder To Cry On

Treated so badly and yet loved so right
The only thing that is always in sight
Is  that one person who's there when he's through
It Is that one person who's waiting for you

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  • Ms.struggle
    August 9, 2007
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    wow so deep but i like your style

    c-dizzle


  • WhatAboutAnna
    August 8, 2007

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    wow...short but amazingly deep. its a truely talented poet that can write a short poem and still portray the same depth as with a long one...


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 8, 2007
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    wow, this is really good. I could use a shoulder to cry on sometimes... well, I do have my bf.. he was there when my grandpa died... he was there at the funeral and at the wake... which was very nice of him. haha. good writing! keep it up!

    Crimson