we woke
looking like raw chicken
and other early bird deals
our skin touched
somewhere below the elbow
but above the knee
it burned, didn't it,
when i left like snow
melting away
[under your skin]
the comeback- not so good?
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you were one of the first people to comment me on here so i decided to return with a comment for you. i liked this, sorry i can't say much else but its kinda hard to explain. so yay for you! ~Ess
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Excellent ending..
loved this.
So good to see you posting again.
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Thanks hun, I'm hoping to get back into things again. <3
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You know what? I like this. A lot. I can't describe exactly why, but I do. You say a lot with a little Shirley, it's a great talent. I'm awed. Bravo!
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i know. my momma says my mouth packs a punch even when i don't speak for days. i'm damn proud of it. glad you liked it sweetheart.
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