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Starving to Death

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                HUNGRY, STOMACH GROWLING

                ARMS SO COLD AND BODY ACHING

                SOME WOULD THINKING 

                GOSH YOU ARE FAKING!

 

 

                NO, THAT IS WHAT IT'S LIKE

                 AN INSATIABLE HUNGER FOR THE NIGHT

                 TO  FIND SOMEONE  YOU LOVE

 

                  AND BE WARM AND TOLD YOUR SPECIAL

 

                  NO ONE LIKE YOU, BABE

                  AND NO ONE IN VALUE

                  NO ONE IN THE WORLD

                   I'D DO ANYTHING FOR YOU

 

 

                   YOU'RE MY QUEEN, MY SUNSHINE

                    YOU'RE JUST EVERYTHING TO ME

                     BABY, YOU'RE MY LIFE,

                      WITHOUT YOU, I'D NOT BE!

Author notes

We can all be fed, clothed, but if there is no love, what is there....Words, actions.....to show love makes partners feel they only exist perhaps....

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  • poetryality silver member
    August 10, 2007

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    I agree...if there were no love the world would indeed be a strange and desolate place. I surely wouldn't want to be around. A very thought-provoking entry.

    Thank you for this entry and the best to you.


    Much LOVE ♥

    Renee

  • goalsv
    August 9, 2007

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    Very nice poem about the yearning for love! It really shows that no matter what we have without love it doesn't measure up!