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A Desolate Place (Triolet)

A life without love is a desolate place
where cold hearts fiercely reign
fallen from Gods' grace
a life without love is a desolate place
the peace in Gods' love we must embrace
nothing in life is more humane
a life without love is a desolate place
where cold hearts fiercely reign

The peace in Gods' love we must embrace
nothing in life is more humane
a life without love is a desolate place
the peace in Gods' love we must embrace
fill all evil with much disgrace
thoughts of a better life we entertain
the peace in Gods' love we must embrace
nothing in life is more humane



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  • poetryality silver member
    August 10, 2007
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    I love the form you used for this entry. I am familiar with it, and you did an excellent job. Your words ring true in my ears. The message is very clear; we need love to exist. Excellent!

    Thank you for this entry and the best to you.


    Much LOVE ♥

    Renee