A life without love is a desolate place
where cold hearts fiercely reign
fallen from Gods' grace
a life without love is a desolate place
the peace in Gods' love we must embrace
nothing in life is more humane
a life without love is a desolate place
where cold hearts fiercely reign
The peace in Gods' love we must embrace
nothing in life is more humane
a life without love is a desolate place
the peace in Gods' love we must embrace
fill all evil with much disgrace
thoughts of a better life we entertain
the peace in Gods' love we must embrace
nothing in life is more humane
In a list
A contest entry
- A not so quick contest (24 hours) by poetryality.
525 points, ended August 13, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the form you used for this entry. I am familiar with it, and you did an excellent job. Your words ring true in my ears. The message is very clear; we need love to exist. Excellent!
Thank you for this entry and the best to you.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee

