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  • Biciaksr
    August 15, 2007

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    wow

    very very sweet...beautiful feelings even if you're not really sure where they came from your author's notes...if it does mean anything, this person is very lucky and should know even if sometimes we don't want to ruin something we already have (like friendship) wondering is even worse than knowing what can come from the possibilities lol...i m writing too much...nonetheless, it's a great n special poem!


  • mandi3939
    August 9, 2007

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    I loved the way it opened, I have been that person. I don't know if its even unrequited love, or that weird place where the other person isn't quite ready. I really liked this, thought it's message was very close to my own life.


  • giving up on poetry
    August 9, 2007
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    nice sweet unrequttied love nice confused tossed around feel