Frazzled vultures encamped,
as talons ripped and
devoured deaths face.
Author notes
Prompt 2: Every sweet has its sour; every evil it’s good. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
A contest entry
- Quickie 10x10x10 PROMPT IS UP!! by KelceyBee by Forlorn Dreams.
380 points, ended August 8, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. Congrats on the gold
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I like that it is very good short and to the point but excellent
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congratulation on your gold win your poem was truely amazing
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I don't know why but i feel sad after reading your poem. good luck in the contest
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Mmmmmmmm, I'm kinda hungry now, Got any spare face? Interesting take on the prompt. Best of luck...Scott
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Wonderful! This is what I was looking for in the prompt! Very dark and so descriptive. I love the imagery here. Excellent poem! Thank you for entering (and following the rules), Best wishes to you!
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Nice and I could see the picture unfold
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