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A Blanketed World

A deceiving plot,
a sight seen terribly wrong...
motionless defeat.

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It's prompt #2.

A contest entry

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  • Lilypad
    August 8, 2007
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    Short but great! Good luck in the contest!


  • Entwining Beauty
    August 8, 2007
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    wow this is amazing good luck in the contest


  • Griswold gold member
    August 8, 2007
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    Nicely done for the prompt, best of luck to you...Scott


  • Forlorn Dreams
    August 8, 2007

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    I assume this is for the quote. I enjoyed how you described it, very unique. Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 8, 2007
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    different take on the prompt is what you were able to try here

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