Black rose
Dripping
Tears stain it
As its thrown away
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Quickie 10x10x10 PROMPT IS UP!! by KelceyBee by Forlorn Dreams.
380 points, ended August 8, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such wonderful imagery and emotions. Congrats on your bronze
Great write!
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congratulation on your win
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thanks =]
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poor beautiful rose I love roses peach ones i dont like red roses as i feel they are common I like to be different from everyone else but i loved your poem good luck
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This is the first poem I read about the rose. I really enjoyed it.It made me think that it was given to someone and it angered them or upset them and they threw it away. That sounds so bland but the imagery in my head was great! Thank you so much for this entry and for following the rules. Best wishes!
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great words to tell about the sadden feelings of a rose no longer loved or needed
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Very nice take on the prompt. You also have a really good eye. I wish you the best in the comp.
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Nicely done for the given prompt. Best of luck to you...Scott
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