Pacing back and forth
Through an empty church cooridoor,
I closed my eyes to hear the lord-
Echoing inside my ears
Was the sound of my fears,
Coming from the lips of internal mirrors.
Silence!
Dare not speak.
Listen carefully to me.
I have found a second voice,
Playing with me like toys...
I verse its word without choice.
Perhaps I am a silent prophet,
Or young writer grown exausted,
But I script this writ as a hostage.
We are more than we can know,
With omnipresence waiting to grow-
Our bodies are vesels for our souls.
Breathing?
Why waste your time?
The world is waiting,
Go get your dreams.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Powerful write. I liked the part of bodies being vessels for souls. Never thought of it like that before. Makes me think of how life can be like a river and we float different ways in life depending on what choices we make.
I liked the ending, too. It seemed inspirational like to make people want to go out and achieve what they want to do in life. Keep up the great writes.
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wow.. its an amazing write, the flow the choice of words, really good
i like these lines
Echoing inside my ears
Was the sound of my fears,
Coming from the lips of internal mirrors.
Silence!
"But I script this writ(e) as a hostage"
(edited: cuz i jus got confused as a different poet)
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Thank you
I appreciate that you enjoyed this work...
The word writ was spelled purposely as that...
It esssentially means the same as write, or paprer, scripture...
I just chose writ because it sounded better to me than any other choice that came to mind.
I am planning, if I had previously stated, to publish soon. If may be of any help to me in finding a strong dependable outlet, I'd be most thankful. I am researching what companies seem to be the most advantageous for my work. I am not looking to make a living from my writing, but would love to. I am looking to make small profits, but want my words to reach the most eyes possible. Again thank you for being such a wonderful fan, if I may call you that. I love to see that my poetry is being appreciated and because of you and others, I am able to determine what poems have the most effect on my audience. Thank you dearly,
I hope to hear from you in the coming days.
TAKE CARE...
Peace and love,
Lost
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