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Triskaidekaphobia

I do suffer with
Triskaidekaphobia,
Fear of twelve plus one.

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"Purple monkeys fly at night"

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  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    August 9, 2007

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    Ha. Wow.

    My cousin and I found this very funny and I especially like how you wrote out the last line instead of saything the number. Are you really suffering from a morbid fear of the number "twelve plus one"???? =O You should message me and let me know!!!! Lol. ^.^ Please?!?!? I LOVE YOU!!!! lmso....


  • Mybeautyisfake
    August 9, 2007

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    very interesting.
    im not very intelligent so i would be able to tell you what it means. But it was very good. I like shorter pieces cause they are normally short and to the point. Long pieces are alright but they have to keep my attention. lol.
    I do agree with the comment below mine, the last line could use something a little extra =]


  • micol
    August 8, 2007
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    Good word to use, but I wish the last line had a bit more punch.