Written By Lisa Morris
The words you wrote to someone else
Are the same you wrote to me
I wondered in my silent pain
"Oh God how can this be!"
Cause I won't change to make you see
The rhythm of my heart
And in the lonely dark of night
The tears begin to start
They fall like the pouring rain
That soaks my lonely bed
And even if I close my eyes
I still see the words you said
For no one in my tortured life
Has ever touched my soul
Like the man that stood before me
And the love that won't let go
So take me for who and what I am
Or else just let me be
Only space will heal my heavy heart
Only time can set me free
Author notes
And there he stands....Caught in a web from the past. Take caution les' the web will catch you in it's fibers.
This is about as real as it gets.
I am not in an AP family. I would make a good mother,sister,daughter I am very friendly and eager to make AP friends and family.
DarkestAngel68
A contest entry
- I need Ap family because I cant stand mine anymore by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended August 15, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Something real! (no dramma) by MissyAnn.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gone and Done With.....You. by Nostalgia.
550 points, ended September 7, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BackStabber! by GypsyEyes.
575 points, ended April 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh this made me a little sad.
you did a beautiful job and i really enjoyed reading this! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!
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Ihave nothing to say...except that it was beautiful
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excellent poem
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excellent
Congrats on the Gold! You express your emotions very well in this poem. The first stanza really hits home, and I think there must be a lot of men that do the same thing. What losers!
Ethereal One
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This was amazing! Truly beautiful!
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Oh Dear!
I'm sorry Lisa but I see you have your name posted with your entry. It is an anonymous contest I'm afraid. Unfortunately I must remove your poem. Apologies for not noticing sooner.
Best of luck in future contests.
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Wow really good! I enjoyed reading this piece! Great job Thank you so much for entering! Excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!
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Thank you for entering.
Good luck in the contest.
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Your words linger within my mind, sometimes I feel this way, though of later more so than ever, such depth and heartfelt sorrow, yet plea's of purerty and emotion, alot of feelings interwoven with each a truely powerful piece.
As to Ap families I really have no clue how that works, or I'd send you the info, being aloner I don't fit much anywhere.
Peace to you always and a wish that life truely gets better full of love and joy
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such a meaningful poem that could only come from the heart. Lovely write.
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They fall like the pouring rain
That soaks my lonely bed
And even if I close my eyes
I still see the words you said
That has to be my favorite part. The ending line is deep for me. What i got out of it was the pain of loving someone so much you know only what they tell you because their words are all you can take into perspective. Very nice poem!
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I dont' have an AP family either i would make a good sister......but to be honest i have no idea how it works?
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This is a nice poem of advice. Thank you for sharing this with me. If you would put your user name in the Author box and which family member you would like to be I would appericate it. Thank you
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