I stood with you where the river met the sea, and the sun reflected sequins on the surface. And you smiled and I smiled and we walked for miles to a swing where I swung and you watched and I laughed and threw my head back in joy. And we read the words the family left, every letter a tragedy. And it wasn't my language but you helped me to read it and I knew at that moment that both our hearts had been opened to something new and sad and beautiful. I'm so glad I shared it with you.
Ffrind gorau, rwy'n dy gari di. Am byth.
please,
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Possibly my favorite one.
The feeling is pure.
The atmosphere feels so right. -
my quest is for honesty, so i'll be blunt.
i think this line is a tad cliche: I stood with you where the river met the sea, and the sun reflected sequins on the surface (yet i feel it might be intentional, or an inside joke/personal reference)...
--but the last line makes up for everything.
the breathtaking pace really does it for me, also. i feel like i've been running with eyes closed and a sweaty palm entwined in yours.
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Beautiful and romantic. Love is childlike even when it is mature.I'm so glad you shared this with all of us. Thank you.
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reflective work
This feels so true; the walking, and smiling and joy. You captured with some subtle internal rhymes a day I was made to recall. Wales is where my soul lives too. Phyl
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