((Are you happy now))
sitting there
e x p o s e d
to everyone?
((aren’t you glad))
the fire
is so {delightfully} cruel
and giving us all
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to your *shame*
and, isn’t f.u.n.n.y
how you try to
| h | i | d | e |
the tears that are
s
t
r
e
a
m
i
n
g
d
o
w
n
your face.
and, now
darling;;
((are you sure))
[this.is.love] ?
Author notes
Inspired by an incident with my cousin and her husband.
A contest entry
- ♥Drop The Dagger And Lather The Blood On Your Hands, Romeo!♥ by On Frail Wings..
550 points, ended August 25, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Humiliating isn't what I call love, it's called abuse to me. But everyones version is different;just shows how sad some people can be.
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wow... it's a good poem
and i love the way you set it out
especially the tears streaming bit
clever
=)
SeeJ
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awww, yeah you told me about that. Well you know Abing girls always marry men like the Abing men.lol But anyways, this was an awesome poem. So expressive and blunt.
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lol. Yea. Well, they were talking the next morning, so they apparently made up. Don't get me wrong, I like her husband, but, was just putting a dif. perspective on it.
Thank you muchly.
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