Stand beneath the water,
Let it fall around,
In a myraid of colour,
Beating the ground.
Let it rain upon me,
Washing away the pain,
Easing the day's darkness
Keeping me sane...
See it gently capture
The flickering daylight,
As the world falls to shadow,
And day becomes night -
But that doesn't matter,
Not while I'm here,
The water is my heartland,
And my path becomes clear.
A contest entry
- waterfalls by starwing.
600 points, ended August 24, 2007, 13 entries
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Awsome i know how you feel!! When i am up set I just want to be away in the rain and if it is not raining I go to the river below my house to the waterfall IDK water is just my safe place to wash away all my worries! Keep up the good work bc you have talent! Feel free to check out my page anytime!!
Jess
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very very nice.... rain and cleansing of the spirit...
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Wow, I could see a girl running through the rain, because of hurt, then standing there crying as the rain poured down, then almost night, she realizes what she needs to do. Great poem here, I don't know if thats what you were trying here, but thats what I got, thanks for sharing!
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