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Love From His Girl

His Girl...
Yeah...
that's right...
I'm all his...
I'd gladly sell my soul to him,
just to be in his embrace
and feel his sweet intoxicating lips
pressed against mine
To feel his fingers run across my skin
as if on a gentle breeze
and touch the edges of my skin

Oh the longing sensation of his sweet intoxication
as our bodies intertwine with one another
with the passion and sensation of the heated action between us
and when the night finally falls
draping it's cloak upon the earth
oh shall the passion suffocate the lovers...

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  • Mercury Rising
    September 25, 2007

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    Just a wonderfully sensual and lovely poem with a fine lyrical flow. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.

    David