A cold winter night
Frost on the sill
Snow on the ground
Solace in the warmth
A firelit bed
A lovers embrace
Reality enfolding
Hold her close
Reaffirm your love
Awaken now
A cold empty bed
A shattered tranquility
Please tell me what you think
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What? you just broke my heart.
Great use of irony, you had me all the way even with the loss of love in the end. Your structure of images is beautiful. Keep up the good writing.
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I'll make your bed all warm and cozy again I promise.
ily
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You may be an asshole but wow...really great poetry. I guess I'll give you the applause you deserve...but that doesnt mean I like doin it!
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he's not an asshole...thank you very much.
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That is your opinion. Keep it to yourself or share it with someone who cares about what you think. I do not...thank you very much.
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Wow, i like the emotion you put into this piece. Its really...good Reminds me of the stuff i used to write.
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